Whispers Beneath the Crimson Veil

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I love getting back into the open ended storytelling, my mind is racing with ideas and possible indications, i wont reveal much details as im not wanting to spoil anything but ill hint at where my mind wanders..

I wrote a little thing, only on my own accord and with no knowledge of anything but my own creative writing.

Whispers Beneath the Crimson Veil


We were gathered by the fire, wrapped in silence deeper than night. The dunes of Toulan held no warmth after sundown. Stars stretched overhead like the eyes of forgotten watchers, unmoving and too numerous. We had spoken little that evening. The sand felt wrong beneath us, too smooth, as if it had been brushed by something vast and unseen.


That was when he arrived.


Not from any direction we could mark. He was simply there, crouched at the fire’s edge. His robes were worn with age and salt. His skin bore the dust of many deserts and something else, something that clung like the scent of sealed tombs. Around his neck hung a narrow vial filled with a thick fluid that moved as if stirred by its own dream.


He did not speak at first. Only stared into the flames with eyes too ancient to be whole.


When he spoke, the fire dimmed.


"There are nights when the moon is absent, but not gone. It gazes elsewhere, and while it does, they gaze here. The sky turns its face. The wind forgets its name. On those nights, the world is thinnest."

He drew shapes in the sand with fingers that trembled not from age, but from the weight of memory.


"You call it the Crimson Veil. A name for something that should not be named. It is no curtain, no shroud. It is a boundary of will, a membrane that pulses with hunger. It does not obscure, it protects. Or perhaps it imprisons."

His voice cracked then, not from frailty, but from a sound trying to escape him.


"And she, the one you call Dark Moon Enigma… she is not beside the Veil. She is the Veil. Her breath keeps it intact. Her dreams shape its edge. Without her, the barrier would fold and tear and spill."

He paused, long enough that we thought he might be done, but his gaze lifted toward the dunes and the stars beyond, and when he continued, it was not to the fire, but to something far away.


"There is one who draws near to the truth. His name is Hally. A youth still wrapped in skin and ignorance, but marked. Each day he wakes with a little less of himself, and a little more of what should never be known. He does not see fully, but the fragments grow. Soon the shape will emerge. And then he will see. And seeing is the first sin."

The old man rose without sound. He left no footprints. The place where he had crouched was blackened, and the air held the scent of scorched herbs and burnt metal. We watched the night long after he was gone, unable to speak.


But it was not over.




Some nights later, the journal of Dr R C Veylan, a scholar of forgotten places, was recovered from beneath the sands. It was water-stained and ink-blurred, but one passage remained:


"Hally is unraveling. He no longer responds to his own name with certainty. I believe he hears something behind the stars, a cadence older than language. His sketches are growing more precise. They resemble the glyphs found in the obsidian tablets beneath the Orotell ruins. These symbols are not art. They are invitations."

"I do not believe Hally is being corrupted. I believe he is being remembered."

"And that is far worse."



Then came the intercepted transmission. Its origins remain unknown. Some say it was broadcast from beneath the Obsidian Expanse. Others claim it came from nowhere, that it simply was.


The voice was female, low and echoing with a resonance not fully of this realm. She called herself Decca.


"Why chaos? Why blood? Because order is a lie. The Veil, that crimson skin stretched across reality, is not natural. It is stitched from the breath of one who dares to dream against the tide. She holds it. She breathes it into place. But she weakens. And I have seen what lies on the other side."

"I dream with open eyes. The ichor sings. The mirror grows thin. And the moon fails to rise."

"This world is a prison of light. I will burn it to reveal the dark that waits beneath. I will tear the Veil. I will unmake her silence."

"Let the planet burn. Let the truth rise. I am Decca. I have seen the Other Sky. I will bring it here."



There have been sightings since then. The sky shifts without warning. The Veil shimmers at the edges of things. Whole quadrants go silent, only to return with altered topographies and blurred memory logs. Hally was last seen walking into the Western dunes at twilight, whispering to no one.


None dare follow.


And now, in our dreams, the Veil pulses. It waits. And it remembers.
 

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I moved your post out of the Toulan event thread and to the Toulan Fan Fiction section. Also, no one knows yet what the Crimson Veil represents, and it will become part of official lore, so what is about to be revealed will not coincide what what you wrote. I just ask that you be mindful of the writing so that it doesn't confuse people about our official lore when I go public with it ... thanks. :)
 
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